Thursday 2 July 2009

Success' Story!!



I

Before we can our Dreams reach
Inhabited by joys and cheers,
Comes a forest dark and thick—
The kingdom of Fears and Tears.
It’s a journey arduous and long
That every traveler has to take,
Before they get what they long,
Before their Dreams take real shape.
But once you enter this street
There’s no possible retreat
Until you win or embrace Defeat.

II

Trees devoid of flowers and leaves,
Disappointments buzzing flies
That lulls Hope forever to sleep,
Haunting soul piercing cries
That claws every afraid heart.
Delusions begin to whisper into the ears,
Misleading travelers to wrong path,
Where unfortunate few get cuts and scars
Who wish to stop or retreat.
But there’s no possible retreat,
Until you win or embrace Defeat.

III

Only the courageous few that still move on,
A ladder to their Dreams learn to make,
With wood of Courage, Will power strong,
Knowledge, Confidence, Belief and Faith.
Their experiences they brew and stir
To fuel the light of Insight,
Learn to extract gold from womb of Fear
And give every obstacle a good fight.
On success’ throne, they finally sit
Having never thought of retreat,
As victors they learn to defeat Defeat.

[ps:- This poem was written two years ago......found it in my old dairy and thought of posting it here....hope you all like it.]

9 comments:

Brosreview said...

This has that instant feel of a narrative poem. I like this one. Each one stands for itself. And, moreover, I was imagining some background score as well. So, this could serve as a ballad as well. Well done!!! Keep such great works coming!!! It carries a strong message which i cherish very much.

PULKIT said...

very motivating!
a brilliant read..took me into another world of bliss!
into a new wave of optimism!!

Sneha said...

How is it possible for you to write so beautifully.:)

dreamer said...

@Brosreview,
Glad you liked it:)
Thanks for the comment!!

dreamer said...

@Pulkit,
"took me into another world of bliss!
into a new wave of optimism".
Thanks for saying that I intended it to be that way...seems I succeeded :)
Thanks for the comment!!

dreamer said...

@Sneha,
hehehhe...Thanks for the comment:)

Bhuvan Gupta said...

I really liked this poem ... good choice of words and well written. Cheers, keep it up

dreamer said...

@Bhuvan,
Welcome to my blog and Thanks for the comment:)

pinkZz said...

missin yu

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