“Amusing isn't it!! Defining us through other’s eyes, the world dangerously becomes a gallery of mirror. Where only one mirror doesn’t distort or manipulate, only one that reflects the true self, the soul. In life’s maze to be happy one should avoid dissociation with self . Definitely when one already has that special mirror” looking into her eyes, treasuring her hand within his hold “ It seems you are my looking glass. I never knew myself before I met you.” Without waiting for her answer he slid the diamond ring into her hand and smiled. Her eyes gleamed in surprise, she smiled back.
Tears made way through her wrinkled eyes many years later, when she could only hold him in her memories, remembering the best thing that happened to her.{p.s Was trying to attempt Flash55 but I ended up writing more than 100 words.Hope you all like it. }
{p.s :- I have posted my first guest post in Miss Sunshine's blog celebrating her completion of happy 100 posts....She is a awesome blogger....Why don't you all visit her and congratulate her!!
You can read my guest post here.}






17 comments:
Very well-written! The only thing I would suggest would playing around with the structure. The dots following each line gives it more of a "rambling" feel more than a deep feel, if you know what I mean.
Yes, I read your guest post which was just brilliant! Well done!!! Keep writing!!!
had commented on ur guest post earlier in the day already :)
as far as this one is concerned...hmm... welcome to the world of proses dear!
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keep writing! 55 fiction or flass55 is a challenge in itself and I have worked on it time and again @ Writers louge but 55fiction and acrostics are not my favorite jonoure!
anyways...thats purely my opinion, I do love reading them at times :)
@Brosreview,
Thanks for pointing it out....yes it gives a rambling feel, would try to restructure it.
Thanks for this comment and for the one at the guest post!!
Have a nice day!!
@Pulkit,
Flash55 surely is challenging:)
Thanks for the comment and for the one at my guest post as well!!
Have a nice day!!
you write very well...
i will definitely drop by often...:)
Shraddha
i loved it..
how beautifully n briefly u hav described dis..i luvd it....
bt dese r d words dat r actully nt to be said bt to feel..
keep up d gud work
GOD BLESS U DEAR
happy blogging
d way u hav expressed is beautiful n brief..very well done bt dese things r bettr to be felt den said..
GOD BLESS U DEAR
happy blogging
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hey nice try..
i love it...
so sweet.. :)
@theselfloveproject,
Hi Shraddha, welcome to my blog!! I am glad you think so...if you like the blog it would be nice if you also follow it...Looking forward to meeting you often here...t.c , byee.
@pinkZz,
Good to see you here after long time.
Thanks for the comment!!
Have a nice day:)
@pushpeen,
Thanks for the comment!!
@FishHawk,
Thanks a lot for including Roses and Thorns and the image you included was also nice.
Thanks!!:)
@Sahityika,
Good to see you after a long time.
Thanks for the comment dear:)
that was a nice attempt at 55 even though it went above 55 words...
I am still thinking how can we shorten the story without losing the punch.. Maybe this story was not meant to be 55 fiction..
Wiaitng for your next post!!!
Hi Rahul,
Thanks for your comment and Keep visiting!!
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